“WITHIN my heart, I found a secret bower…”
suspended dreams that dot her sleeping mind
now melt like clouds into the clearing sky
an Eastern glow, a bird begins to sing
rustles it’s feathers, shakes, and takes to wing
she wakes, from where she lay prepares to rise
to lose the night, the newborn day to find
this was stunning! every verse is beautiful. someone needs to make music for this to be sung to.
:-)
I should probably have said that I'm not a poetry kind of person, I get lost pretty quickly in verse. but this was really something.
I appreciate the notion and I hope I will put it to music. I ordinarily start with a melody to write lyrics but this will be a good challenge
do you have your music anywhere online?
not yet; haven’t made my debut yet 😁✌️
what about you?
here: handwrist.bandcamp.com
I have a sort of guide to the genres I have explored here, in case there's one you are interested in more:
https://treesandtriads.substack.com/p/one-year-of-essays-and-stuff
Beautiful ❤️
suspended dreams that dot her sleeping mind
now melt like clouds into the clearing sky
an Eastern glow, a bird begins to sing
rustles it’s feathers, shakes, and takes to wing
she wakes, from where she lay prepares to rise
to lose the night, the newborn day to find
this was stunning! every verse is beautiful. someone needs to make music for this to be sung to.
:-)
I should probably have said that I'm not a poetry kind of person, I get lost pretty quickly in verse. but this was really something.
I appreciate the notion and I hope I will put it to music. I ordinarily start with a melody to write lyrics but this will be a good challenge
do you have your music anywhere online?
not yet; haven’t made my debut yet 😁✌️
what about you?
here: handwrist.bandcamp.com
I have a sort of guide to the genres I have explored here, in case there's one you are interested in more:
https://treesandtriads.substack.com/p/one-year-of-essays-and-stuff
Beautiful ❤️